Conor – this is an AMAZING piece of writing! Myself and my niece (Freya) think it’s wonderful! The language you’ve used is great and there are lots of things in it that Freya likes – eg. dinosaurs. We also love the ending – it’d be very interesting to live in a yellow submarine!!!!I love the repetition of the poem as well as the ideas you’ve chosen – keep up the fantastic work and thank you for sharing it!!!!
Miss Parker.
Wow Conor – what a wonderful poem! Such fantastic vocabulary choices. I especially like how you have described with your senses. Outstanding work!
Miss McDonagh
Conor – this is an AMAZING piece of writing! Myself and my niece (Freya) think it’s wonderful! The language you’ve used is great and there are lots of things in it that Freya likes – eg. dinosaurs. We also love the ending – it’d be very interesting to live in a yellow submarine!!!!I love the repetition of the poem as well as the ideas you’ve chosen – keep up the fantastic work and thank you for sharing it!!!!
Miss Parker.
Wow Conor – what a wonderful poem! Such fantastic vocabulary choices. I especially like how you have described with your senses. Outstanding work!
Miss McDonagh
The vocabulary and imagination is incredible. Well done Conor! Hope you are well.
Mrs Prentice.
Hello Conor, I am really excited to see how you used your imagination to write a fantastic poem. Well done!
Mrs. Méndez