A lovely story Mateja – I can see you have remembered to include a simile. Well done.
Thank you Mrs. Joyce I worked hard on it.
bro that is awsome
Wow great adjective choices such as abandoned. Super story. I wonder which planet was Jack’s favourite.
Thanks Mrs. Goindi, Jack’s favourite was Venus but it was hard for Jack to stay there for long because it was too hot.
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A lovely story Mateja – I can see you have remembered to include a simile. Well done.
Thank you Mrs. Joyce I worked hard on it.
bro that is awsome
Wow great adjective choices such as abandoned. Super story. I wonder which planet was Jack’s favourite.
Thanks Mrs. Goindi, Jack’s favourite was Venus but it was hard for Jack to stay there for long because it was too hot.