Fantastic adjective choices. I love your use of powerful descriptive phrases: the darkness of her hood, the sandy perimeter of the beach, the beach brightened and the bubbles lifted… You have brought the story to life. Well done.
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Fantastic adjective choices. I love your use of powerful descriptive phrases: the darkness of her hood, the sandy perimeter of the beach, the beach brightened and the bubbles lifted… You have brought the story to life. Well done.